If it had a more urgent feeling, this story might require resolution, but I don't think it currently does. I like the ambiguousness of her situation.
I have a Google document called "Where Story Bits Go to Die" where I keep all my writing odds and ends, as well as parts of finished stories that I cut during editing.
Lovely, a sort of fuzzy feeling to this one. Has a very distinctive style. I think it works perfectly as an isolated piece. Do you feel it's calling to you to continue it? Or leave it as be?
If it had a more urgent feeling, this story might require resolution, but I don't think it currently does. I like the ambiguousness of her situation.
I have a Google document called "Where Story Bits Go to Die" where I keep all my writing odds and ends, as well as parts of finished stories that I cut during editing.
Lovely, a sort of fuzzy feeling to this one. Has a very distinctive style. I think it works perfectly as an isolated piece. Do you feel it's calling to you to continue it? Or leave it as be?
Tombow is a great name, by the way.