You're running this serial well and I regret that I came to it late but this isn't my usual genre so I kind of regret that I have to keep reading to find out what happens next.
Somehow, this is scarier than the fact that I can’t move."
This was chilling, I liked it. I also really enjoyed the detail in the description of the clown, particularly the extra digit that "flops around like a boneless fish". There are some really great descriptions throughout this story, little details that just bring the entire image together for me.
You're running this serial well and I regret that I came to it late but this isn't my usual genre so I kind of regret that I have to keep reading to find out what happens next.
You're also about to regret that it's not over yet, because at least when it is, you might get some sleep!
"Almost like he’s setting up a shot.
Somehow, this is scarier than the fact that I can’t move."
This was chilling, I liked it. I also really enjoyed the detail in the description of the clown, particularly the extra digit that "flops around like a boneless fish". There are some really great descriptions throughout this story, little details that just bring the entire image together for me.