I really like this change from the previous iteration. The clown is already scary and doubling down on that by having him punish the others really heightens the tension, especially when you also make it clear there are only two tents remaining.
I didn’t get to this in time to vote in the poll, but I feel like the main character survives this story in the end. Not sure why, just my take at this stage.
I really like this change from the previous iteration. The clown is already scary and doubling down on that by having him punish the others really heightens the tension, especially when you also make it clear there are only two tents remaining.
I didn’t get to this in time to vote in the poll, but I feel like the main character survives this story in the end. Not sure why, just my take at this stage.
Thank you for mentioning the Lunar Awards, Olivia!